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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Rollercoaster Murder Mon May 09, 2011 6:40 pm | |
| First Leo knew that Jimmy and Rachel were on a date, weirdly Leo had been on the train along with them. Leo looked at the rollercoaster. He had seen that little kids were sneaking in, from what he heared that those kids were George, Mitch, and Amy.
((A/N: Genta, Mitchsuko, Ayumi.))
At first the rolercoaster had gone into a dark tunnel, then suddenly, Leo felt a tear over him, and then something thudded in the ground below. A liquid poured onto him. He tasted it, it tasted like human blood, he knew how it tasted because one day he had gotten a nose bleed and it went int his mouth.
As they got into the light he saw at the people in front of him. Screams peirced the air. A man had been beheaded and there was blood every were.
Leo had looked and saw the craziness. The train stopped. Leo looked and saw blood dripping fomr everywhere in the rollercoaster. He saw that the Insperctor Meguire had come.
((A/N: Inspector Mergue))
He looked and saw two men, one man who didnt wear glasses had the eyes of a cold killer who didnt feel and Guilt.
Last edited by Leonardo Clam on Sat May 14, 2011 5:28 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Conan Edogawa
Posts : 222 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Fri May 13, 2011 9:21 pm | |
| More detail in post please, then I have more to work on for my reply | |
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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sat May 14, 2011 5:28 pm | |
| ((Ok edited my post, and it's Leo not Leon. I know I use my picture as Hattori, but I'm pretending that Leo only looks a little bit like him.)) | |
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Conan Edogawa
Posts : 222 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sat May 14, 2011 7:39 pm | |
| Jimmy gasped and screeched as the rollercoaster went around the track at speeds faster than anyone's eyes could follow. He clutched onto the strap around his body that was keeping him in place, his knuckles going white with the pressure... Splash! Blood! Jimmy gasped, covering his face as droplets of blood splattered onto it, some dripping into his mouth due to the high speeds... Then something flicked past his face very quickly. As soon as the rollercoaster ride emerged into the light again, Jimmy could see the sight and even though he had been to hundreds of crime scenes before, he was quite shocked by the sight of a beheaded man two seats in front of him. He quickly clambered off the ride, calling the police who cordoned off the area and stopped anyone leaving. "There's been a murder!" He announced as the dead body dropped out of the ride, the straps coming off from his chest... | |
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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sat May 14, 2011 8:54 pm | |
| Leo who had been scared said to Jimmy, "Yeah we see that, Sherlock!." Leo felt bad about saying something like that. He looks around, a policeman comes and says "Here's the killer." He pointed at the dead mans girlfriend. She had a knife in her bag. "I didn't do it!" She yells. "It's true, the real killer's the gymnist." Leo says, "Jimmy here can explain it."
((Just do it like on TV Jimmy I wanna hurry and get the skrink over with.)) | |
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Conan Edogawa
Posts : 222 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sat May 14, 2011 9:52 pm | |
| (Great Roleplays are never rushed ) "The gymnast...?" Jimmy spoke to Leo, observing everyone around them. He had been surprise so suddenly about the murder that he didn't actually have time to take all the details of the current scene in... He observed the vehicle. It was set in three rows with lots of columns. Each person sat in a seat in this vehicle. The murdered person had been sitting in one of the seats on the sides, and a beautiful woman had been sitting behind her. The next two had been some dark and shifty men but behind the woman is where Leo sat. Jimmy sat next to Leo. Jimmy sighed, observing the scene of the crime. The victim's gead had been cut off with something very smooth and sharp, and there did not seem to be any brusing or sign of a struggle. Clearly this murder had been done with a sharp weapon... "Hey!" Jimmy barked to the police. "The victim started bleeding out when we were on the tunnel. Go in there and see if you can find anything." | |
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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 6:09 am | |
| The police came back, "We found only pearls." Leo looks at the body, "This man didn't get his cut off, it was ripped off!" He looked at the woman gymnist, who before the rider had a pearl bracelet. Leo had shooken her hand. He pointed out to Jimmy. | |
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Conan Edogawa
Posts : 222 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 9:29 am | |
| "Actually this man's head was sliced off, and the trick for doing so was very simple." Jimmy glanced at Leo with a triumphant grin. Leon had got something wrong! Jimmy told the police to sit in the vehicle and he asked for some rope an a grappling hook. "The murderer..." Jimmy started, sitting in the front seat and putting a thin bag behind his back as the straps came down. "Put something between themselves and the seat so they could slide out again easily." He then slid out onto the seat. "Then because the murderer was skilled in doing so, they could do this easily!" He then knelt on the rollercoaster, supporting his legs on the strap. He pulled a rope with a hoop out from his bag, leaning over to toss it over one of the heads of the policeman who was staging the victim. With the grappling hook attatched to this rope, he returned to his seat quickly and tossed the hook onto the rollercoaster rail. "And with the force of the rollercoaster, this would slice the victim's head right off!" Jimmy then climbed out of the coaster with the police. He then glanced at the gymnast, whom he had shaken hands with earlier. "Say, weren't you wearing a pearl necklace before?" He raised an eyebrow and did a minor grin. | |
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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 9:56 am | |
| Leo sighed. "A rope dosen't slice, it rips." He said. Leo smiles and says, "Only one killer, Jimmy cleared it up........ GYMNIST!" He pointed at the gymnist woman. "You killed the man, you should check her purse." They found a rope in her bag and a hook, also a tissue. "The tissue, you cried didnt ya, that's what the tear on my head was." The gymnist started crying. "He broke up with me!" She yelled, the cops took her away. "One truth prevails." Leo had said. | |
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Conan Edogawa
Posts : 222 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 10:09 am | |
| "Actually, it wasn't a rope." Jimmy raised his eyebrow at Leo. "It was Piano wire, the thing she made her necklace from! Its strong, thin and sharp." Upon seeing Leo incorrectly pronounce the profession of the murderer, Jimmy slapped his head and pointed the finger. "The Gymnast! When you knew you were going to kill him, you started crying... And this was during the rollercoaster ride, otherwise your tears wouldn't have flown sideways!"
With the case wrapped up, Jimmy turned to Leo. "So, how about a quick drink over at the cafe?" He asked. | |
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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 10:15 am | |
| "OW!" Leo yelled, "What was that for?" Leo didn't like being slapped in the head. "Sorry yeah, Piano wire, sorry." Leo said.
As Jimmy asked a quick drink in the cafe. Leo looked at Rachel. "What do you think, Moore?" He asked. Before Leo let Rachel answer. Leo noticed one of those two men running down. "Umm I'll meet up later." He said running after the man. | |
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Conan Edogawa
Posts : 222 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 10:26 am | |
| "Huh..." Jimmy turned to Rachel. "I'll be back!" He smiled, giving her a quick hug before dashing off to follow Leo. He leapt over and under obstacles, sliding under a food cart in an attempt to catch up. The moon was high in the sky now and served as the only point of illumination as the two entered a deserted area by the ferris wheel. Voices were heard. | |
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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 10:28 am | |
| Leo saw that Jimmy also came. Meanwhile, Vodka had been making a deal with a man. As Leo turned around to tell the police, he saw Gin with a pipe about to hit Leo. "Oh crap." | |
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Conan Edogawa
Posts : 222 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 10:40 am | |
| Jimmy was close enough to Leo to see the incoming pipe. He leapt out of the shadows to perform a high kick commonly used in football to deflect the pipe, hopefully knocking it away... | |
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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 10:43 am | |
| Gin smiled and said, "This is what happens to nosy brats!" He brought down the pipe on Jimmy. Gin tried to his Leo but moved out the way, Leo was way too good at karate to even get hit, but Leo tripped over and got hit by the pipe. "Now for the latest invention from our sweet orginization." Gin says ad Vodka walks over. Gin drops one pill in each of the High School Detectives mouth and then pours water in. | |
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Conan Edogawa
Posts : 222 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 10:54 am | |
| Knocked out, Jimmy couldn't exactly do much. The two men made their escape, leaving Jimmy and Leo lying on the ground. "Ugh..." Jimmy groaned, regaining consciousness. He started sweating bullets and his bones felt like they were melting... He closed his eyes, awaiting death. | |
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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 11:02 am | |
| Leo looked at Jimmy. "Ugh! Stay strong, don't!" He made out of his words. He then fell into a sleep.
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Leo woke up. His vision was blurry. I didn't die? He thought. Then two cops came. "Look it's two little kids, are you ok?" One said. Two little kids, there not that much older than us. Suddenly, Leo looked over at Jimmy, where was he, Leo only saw a little kid. Wait. That looks like Jimmy when he was younger. | |
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Conan Edogawa
Posts : 222 Join date : 2011-02-09
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 11:22 am | |
| "Ngh..." Jimmy opened his blurry eyes upon seeing a flashlight shine into them. He struggled to stand up - his muscles were weak. He glanced over at Leo and gave out a loud gasp.
Kids?! | |
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Alex Jones
Posts : 199 Join date : 2011-03-12 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Rollercoaster Murder Sun May 15, 2011 11:28 am | |
| The cops turned around, Leo grabbed Jimmy's arm and started running away, blood dripping down his eyes, he got to Jimmy's house. | |
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